Purpose of the Study.
The main objective of this
research paper is to examine how motivation affects the second language
learning process.
How it involves the
willingness of students and how we as students can improve and exploit all the
advantages that it could generate.
Hi Itzel !!
ResponderBorrarI think that you have to specify in what kind of language you are going to study or is for any language ? and in the second paragraph you wrote the students and after you refer to us and specify what generate advantages.
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Hi itzel!
ResponderBorrari suggest you to change the word examine with analyze since it implies going deeper in your research and more work, so better research.
I think those 2 paragraphs should form only one using coma. I also think, you are overusing the word AND you should also use comas.